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DSLR-A200
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Nov 20, 2011, 1:25:13 AM
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Hear the breathing by JPtHart Hear the breathing by JPtHart
2011, Jan-Pieter 't Hart

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This is an absolutely delightful composition and presented with a high degree of technical excellence.
The light filtering through the autumnal mist creates an ethereal, almost dreamy ambiance accentuated by the subtle, gentle, over exposure.
The path and the arching of the trees is indicative of the artist choosing his viewpoint with great skill since the eye is gently pulled to the third point, in both the vertical and horizontal axes, where we wait for something to emerge from the mist.
Cropping is a most subjective issue and although this composition works very well indeed as it stands for my taste I would have liked to have seen a tighter crop on both the right and left sides since this would increase the arching effect of the trees. These trees on the extremities do not contribute to the arching and in consequence are slightly distracting.
As usual I reserve five stars for the 1 in a 100 image. Notwithstanding this is an excellent effort both technically and aesthetically.
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SwiFecS Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Magical :heart:
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you!
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LaMusaTriste Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional Photographer
WOWZA!! MOOI ZEG
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Student Photographer
Dankjewel! :aww:
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Licentiah Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so beautiful. It is making me teary...
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Tails-155 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Featured here :D

Be sure to check out the others and maybe favorite a few pics!
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ShaddowInTheCorner Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the concept of this one, the titles really speak for you're photography
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Thilu Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
wow beautiful!
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you :aww:
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giggleartgirl Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
All of your work is incredible...but this is breathtaking
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you so much!
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bluedragoneye Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Breathtaking.....
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011  Student Photographer
:thanks:
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bluedragoneye Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are so very welcome :)
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lieveheersbeestje Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011
You are featured in my poll [link] :heart: Hope you don't mind. (:
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Nirvana-inme Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011   Photographer
dream
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Student Photographer
:aww:
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HuederonVis7140Z Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011  Student General Artist
Nice name for this panorama :D
I really liked it :D
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Vox-Stellaress Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love the purples and the pinks in this one! Such interesting and rare colors! It's so beautiful and soothing.
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Student Photographer
Thank you (:
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Dimeolas7 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
so beautifull and peacefull, I want to walk in and get lost.
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Student Photographer
Thanks a lot :)
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incolor16 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
absolutely amazing!!
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Student Photographer
:thanks:
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RavensHiddenSoul Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2011
Ooh, I don't know if you did this on purpose or not, but the division by "thirds" in the photo (branches overhanging the top third, the path heading of into the left third, etc) is very fitting for a picture with these calmer colors, I think. :3 Not to mention the meandering, wandering-off feeling the fade and mist gives~
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JPtHart Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Student Photographer
Thanks once again! I don't think too much about the composition, but it usually turns out to be a composition divided by thirds. :D
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RavensHiddenSoul Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011
You're welcome, again~ ^w^
That's the best way for art to work out, unintentionally. ^^
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youvegotmaille Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011
It looks like a painting... love it.
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011  Student Photographer
Thank you! :aww:
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jchanders Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011
Great trees and light. My sure fave!
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Student Photographer
Thanks a lot! :)
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jeroenpaint Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wow echt een mooie foto! :squee: ziet er sprookjesachtig uit :)
was het daar echt zo paars of is het bewerkt?
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Student Photographer
Dankje! De kleuren komen door de witbalans (:
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Akalia-Draco Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student Filmographer
It looks so magical *u*
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student Photographer
Thank you (:
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Akalia-Draco Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student Filmographer
Any time n_n
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tamara69b Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
breathtaking, i love these pics!
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Photographer
Thank you!
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mokanmg1 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011
I love trees. Awesome!
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JPtHart Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Photographer
Me too! Thanks
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oceaniclove Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011
Very nice mysterious image!
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Photographer
Thanks :)
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Phil-67 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011
Very nice shot !
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JPtHart Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Photographer
Thanks!
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Cleverun Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student General Artist
Beautiful. Absolutely breathtaking.
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Photographer
Thank you :aww:
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yardameus Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011
So still, yet so moving.
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Photographer
Thank you!
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CorruptedAngel440 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I definitely hear the breathing. Very nice work :)
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:iconjpthart:
JPtHart Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Photographer
Thank you (:
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