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SONY
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DSLR-A200
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1/40 second
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F/10.0
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50 mm
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400
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Nov 20, 2011, 1:25:13 AM
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Hear the breathing by JPtHart Hear the breathing by JPtHart
2011, Jan-Pieter 't Hart

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This is an absolutely delightful composition and presented with a high degree of technical excellence.
The light filtering through the autumnal mist creates an ethereal, almost dreamy ambiance accentuated by the subtle, gentle, over exposure.
The path and the arching of the trees is indicative of the artist choosing his viewpoint with great skill since the eye is gently pulled to the third point, in both the vertical and horizontal axes, where we wait for something to emerge from the mist.
Cropping is a most subjective issue and although this composition works very well indeed as it stands for my taste I would have liked to have seen a tighter crop on both the right and left sides since this would increase the arching effect of the trees. These trees on the extremities do not contribute to the arching and in consequence are slightly distracting.
As usual I reserve five stars for the 1 in a 100 image. Notwithstanding this is an excellent effort both technically and aesthetically.
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SwiFecS Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Magical :heart:
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JPtHart Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you!
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LaMusaTriste Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Professional Photographer
WOWZA!! MOOI ZEG
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JPtHart Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Student Photographer
Dankjewel! :aww:
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Licentiah Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so beautiful. It is making me teary...
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Tails-155 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Featured here :D

Be sure to check out the others and maybe favorite a few pics!
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ShaddowInTheCorner Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the concept of this one, the titles really speak for you're photography
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Thilu Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
wow beautiful!
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JPtHart Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you :aww:
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giggleartgirl Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
All of your work is incredible...but this is breathtaking
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